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Her hair was dark french roast, of medium length. Thin, straight strands fell across her face.
Her skin was lighter, the tan of mocha, of indefinite ethnic origin.
Her eyes were a cona, a mocha java, a deep chocolate that drew everything in,
that drew you in.
She even smelled like coffee, this glorious muse.

She was beautiful, I realized with astonishment, this woman sitting across from me.
Not the pre-fab beauty of scantily clad saleswomen,
Not the painted-on beauty of makeup ads,
Not the perfect beauty of a collective stereotype,
But Natural Beauty,
painfully deserving of more than that cliché term.

I didn't know why I hadn't seen it right away,
she was too real, too solid.
She didn't walk like a model, she didn't act the part.
She had seen how cruel the world could be.
She had the sympathetic smile of the one who held others up,
not the vacant look of the one forever held.

Her coffee in hand, her eyes comfortable, she quietly read her book.
I was thankful, I hadn't meant to stare.
I don't think she would have taken offense, that humble visage.
And I couldn't look away, afraid she would disappear,
or not be as I had imagined her.

We chit-chatted in between pages,
I played it cool, I think.
The rain outside making this refuge seem even more warm.
I left, eventually, reluctantly.
We said our goodbyes as friends.
But to this day still,
I take comfort from her smile.
To this day,
I take heart,
from her peace.
©2004-2009 ~BlackH7
:iconblackh7:

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an encounter i had a while back. beyond that, i dont think i have any comment. funny, that. i can usually go on about nothing for hours and hours and hours...

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:iconcelticsillouette:
Oh god...That's so sweet...I know if she read that she'd be stalking you. I totally would.

It's crazy how one encounter can burn into one's mind.

I like this poem an awful lot...Somehow with all the warmth in the poem I can feel it raining outside of where you were...
:iconinmyroom:
its a beautiful piece.. well written, good progression.
:iconblackh7:
i should have clarified, she was about a decade older than me, had a daughter of her own, and it was a professional setting. in no way was i or am i wishing for any sort of relationship with her, i just appreciated her beauty...

but thank you. im happy that this connected with you, emotionally. thanks a lot!
:iconalice712:
this is lovely. it is wonderful to hear good thoughts on strangers of the world. you placed your thoughts beautifuly in my opinion.
:iconblackh7:
thank you., im glad you liked it. im a little...indisposed at the moment. but sometime after the holidays ill get back to you.
:iconsilversteelwolf:
That's one of those, "Amazing, we're both people trying to make it in the world" moments. And for a brief time you are connected in some way, and then you each separate, never to meet again. And yet, better off for the encounter.
:iconblackh7:
exactly. which, strangely enough, is exactly how i feel when corresponding with you! hehehe.

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