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Listen, Speak by ~BlackH7:iconBlackH7:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


Come with me, and just listen.
Put your hand over your heart, and close your eyes.
Center yourself, condense yourself,
then spread out.
Reach.
Draw it in, then explode it outward again.
Synchronize.
Feel it as it washes into you, and reflect it back.
Listen to your heart beat.
Listen to the world breathe.
Match your rhythm to both.
Take it in, radiate it out.
Become part of the whole,
let it become part of you.
Listen, and speak back.
When the waves are equal,
where they come together,
you will find what you seek.
©2005-2009 ~BlackH7
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Author's Comments

i feel a very real connection to the world around me, which iv tried to explain on several occasions. i think ill have to keep trying. but i think this is an alright piece in the mean time. tell me what you think.

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:iconjouka:
~Jouka Jan 19, 2005, 11:15:24 PM
I like it. I'll respond better when I find my brain.

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^^;
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~BlackH7 Jan 19, 2005, 11:34:41 PM
take your time. im glad you like it.
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~PlatinumTalon Jan 20, 2005, 5:12:07 PM
Deep... interesting. What brings you this "deep connection" to the world?

~PT
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~BlackH7 Jan 20, 2005, 7:31:02 PM
im not sure, exactly, it's just something iv always felt. music seems to be a big part of it - rhythm, like i emphasize in this piece. it's hard to explain.

thanks for your input!
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~celticsillouette Jan 20, 2005, 8:38:28 PM
i like it an awful lot...

this might sound weird or unrelated, but it reminds me of falling asleep in a park but at the same time being extremely aware of everything else. it's exactly like that.

:hug: :+fav:

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Mmm...I dunno...

:blackrose:
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~BlackH7 Jan 20, 2005, 10:17:28 PM
:D i knew you'd get it....
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~Solitario Jan 21, 2005, 8:16:43 PM
well i finally gots time to comment! teehee i think its awesome it's very deep and extremely well written you seem so in-tune with your enviroment, def. one of my fav's! :glomp: :w00t!:
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~zozywashere Feb 21, 2005, 3:15:24 AM
i love this, so much energy...do you play music? i think you would definatley like tool, particularly the song lateralis from the album of the same name. listen to the lyrics. you should turn some of your poems into song, if you don't already do so. make some more dosh on the side and sell them to a record company if you don't like singing.

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go take a flying fuck at a rolling donut!
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